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my soul.

Triangles of ivy, broken on the floor;
so that the sun’s light could enter.
Allowing life to spill, and stain the truth beneath,
so that a divine light would enter.

                A burning light (so bright) and full of meaning.
                Merely thought? Or true religion?
                Believing in existence outside one’s self-importance.

Wilted, worthless – these crumbled leaves,
smoulder under the burning-bright gaze.
Misted memories, these forgotten tears,
to be wiped away be gentle hands.

                The melancholy that lasts (so long),
                while all else fades away.
                To drown in a sorrow you no longer comprehend.

Faded laces of green tremble, in a long-gone wind,
unable to reach the height of a dreaming sky.
Spinning thoughts in the chaos of a stolen dream,
no longer have the will to capture their own essence.

                The living of another’s life (so far away),
                yet created by the same truths.
                Similarities abound where life abides.

The deep reach of fragile roots, entwined together,
to draw strength from that one connection.
Reaching out for any one, for just a hand to hold-
for the knowledge that you are not alone.

                For darkness gives another sight (so strange)
                -where shadows become light.
                The ever-changing concept of our reality.


Belief. (in simple truths)
Feeling. (the depth in chaos)
Dreaming. (the spirals of life)
Knowing. (the secrets of reality)


The pieces of my soul.


by Sophie/celestiality 15/2/06
©2006-2009 ~celestiality
:iconcelestiality:

Author's Comments

ive been working on this poem for ages - months - in england and here.
it really means a lot to me, and its changes alot - but... here it is....

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:iconviperishpath:
Beautiful! Bravo! I wish I could write poems like that. :+fav:!

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×´¨;)
¸.•´¸.•´¨;) ¸.•*¨;).
(¸.•´ (¸.•´ .•´
.•´ ¸.•*`•-»*˜¨˜¨*My fate is my own, It's what I make it...and noone can change it but me. *˜¨˜¨*
(¸.•´

You can only command two things: Jack and sh*t, and Jack left town!
:iconflairy-fairy:
BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!! trulyyy amazing!

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Ooooh, fluff! *picks up*

Ooooh, cheesecake! *scoffs*

Ooooh, you! *kisses*
:iconguided-by-voices:
Wow...Not really much else to say but wow. It's stunning, absolutly stunning.

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Keep your friends close. Keep your enemies closer.
:iconcelestiality:
:blushes: thank you so much - im glad you like it! :hug:
and im sure you could - it just takes a while :P

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[Is the joy of flight,
for a half-winged butterfly,
any the less?]
from flight
:iconcelestiality:
:hug: thanks very muchly :)

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[Is the joy of flight,
for a half-winged butterfly,
any the less?]
from flight
:iconcelestiality:
:blushes: thank you m'dear! :hug:

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[Is the joy of flight,
for a half-winged butterfly,
any the less?]
from flight
:iconevil-empress:
This poem is really good Sophie!!!
I like it very much!

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May Justice Prevail For All Those Who Have Fallen
:iconcelestiality:
:hug: thank you very muchly m'dear!

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[Is the joy of flight,
for a half-winged butterfly,
any the less?]
from flight
:iconphoenixreal:
Beautiful. Its hightly emotional and you can simply feel the words as you read them. Its a very thought evoking and thoughtful piece. Wonderful style with which you set it up. :)

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:blackrose:blessed be~*~phoenixreal:blackrose:

Without the darkness, there can be no light. Without the light, there can be no dark. Between, there casts the shadow. I am that shadow.

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